tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post2746735906949585047..comments2023-10-29T21:14:24.325+08:00Comments on SHE in China: Blogging in Chinese -first attemptJonna Wibeliushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08954672453008704738noreply@blogger.comBlogger54125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-79090407056031342272009-12-14T09:37:21.157+08:002009-12-14T09:37:21.157+08:00emm... thanks for threademm... thanks for threadAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-23404325218289305832009-08-07T19:46:58.863+08:002009-08-07T19:46:58.863+08:00苍天啊,大地呀,楼主写的中文文章的确非常好。我也给我的德国同事看了。哈哈:) 赞一个!!!苍天啊,大地呀,楼主写的中文文章的确非常好。我也给我的德国同事看了。哈哈:) 赞一个!!!大熊https://www.blogger.com/profile/02602670017214458327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-55455993594442745812009-03-23T07:36:00.000+08:002009-03-23T07:36:00.000+08:00Thiner eat more!!!I always know that,and that's wh...Thiner eat more!!!I always know that,and that's why I seldom invite thiner to have the dinner together. They are wasting the food!:PUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05915009968182212969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-80031044417583674732009-03-22T09:23:00.000+08:002009-03-22T09:23:00.000+08:00哇!!我也要勤学中文。。哇!!我也要勤学中文。。rock ur lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13823988464979152928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-36529050882914385712009-03-19T17:37:00.000+08:002009-03-19T17:37:00.000+08:00如果不说,这真的就是个中国人写的你写的真好,加油哦如果不说,这真的就是个中国人写的<BR/><BR/>你写的真好,加油哦GWENNN.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15184131662535079875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-81018607227360018512009-03-17T20:26:00.000+08:002009-03-17T20:26:00.000+08:00Hey, Jonna, congratulations for your new process f...Hey, Jonna, congratulations for your new process from another Chinese reader, I'm Heimat. I have been reading your blog for time, it is the first comment.<BR/>I read a book written by a Sweden girl ,whose Chinese name is 李琳, in my college library. It is about her Chinese learning experience and things she saw in China. Here is the book, if you have interests. 金发碧眼看欧洲http://www.douban.com/subject/1183665/?i=0 <BR/>I like Sweden, Volvo, Sophie Zelmani, Anna Lindh, Ingerma Bergman. <BR/>Thanks about your dairy words.养蜂猴https://www.blogger.com/profile/02898325803685357794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-81520625614626019812009-03-17T19:15:00.000+08:002009-03-17T19:15:00.000+08:00为什么女人好吃显得挺可爱,而男人好吃就是猪?这个世界有时候真是不公平啊。=) 写得很好,只有些语言习...为什么女人好吃显得挺可爱,而男人好吃就是猪?这个世界有时候真是不公平啊。=) 写得很好,只有些语言习惯上的小错误(有人已经指出了)。中文是你的第几语言啊?不得不服你的语言天赋。这个世界有时候真是不公平啊..... lolAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-50092401655137712982009-03-17T17:10:00.000+08:002009-03-17T17:10:00.000+08:00Mucho gracias por el poste. Il est un bon libre. ...Mucho gracias por el poste. Il est un bon libre. Grazie. I really wish I knew more languages. I'd write more in Chinese but I can't find the keys on the keyboard and drawing characters in Photoshop would take a long time even if I knew what I was doing.Bagman and Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06760203276065466927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-39348134159841376822009-03-17T13:06:00.000+08:002009-03-17T13:06:00.000+08:00naresh -I won't. I've already written that this wa...naresh -I won't. I've already written that this was a 'one off' several times... so don't worry, u'll be able to read all future posts!Jonna Wibeliushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08954672453008704738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-84316721152223939262009-03-17T13:03:00.000+08:002009-03-17T13:03:00.000+08:00i can't read write or even understand Chinese and ...i can't read write or even understand Chinese and i am getting only square box like chars ( i don't even have Chinese fonts in my system), blogging in Chinese once in a while is good, but don't make it daily activity :(Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-17674789267924581262009-03-17T10:34:00.000+08:002009-03-17T10:34:00.000+08:00sunset -I assume you are Chinese?! If so, I am SO ...sunset -I assume you are Chinese?! If so, I am SO happy that I can write as well as a Chinese third-grader. Only one year ago I felt as if I was on the same level (with my Chinese) as a 4-year old! YEY!Jonna Wibeliushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08954672453008704738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-64746621544030981812009-03-17T09:34:00.000+08:002009-03-17T09:34:00.000+08:00Well, I can't read simplified Chinese, but I used ...Well, I can't read simplified Chinese, but I used an online translator to convert it into traditional so that I could try to read it. I thought the story was so cute, and definitely better than anything I could ever write. I'm still in the category of Chinese learners who 聽得懂 and 看得懂(一點點), but who still have trouble forming comprehensible sentences. :/Stephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15267251618785906035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-718432480017693242009-03-17T08:18:00.000+08:002009-03-17T08:18:00.000+08:00Love your blog, as always! A note about Tess,My hu...Love your blog, as always! <BR/>A note about Tess,<BR/>My husband had the same high metabolism for years...6000+ calories a day and a complete twig. Oh, how I envied him for it!<BR/><BR/>Then we discovered that he has wheat gluten intolerance! It is a disease that treats gluten as a toxin in his system! He was literally slowly starving to death. We would have never caught it if not for a low iron count preventing him from donating blood.<BR/><BR/>There is probably nothing at all wrong with your friend, but my experience with my husband taught me not to envy! I'd prefer my slow metabolism and my daily bread any day!Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10146850926265906453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-46243922864870917292009-03-17T07:56:00.000+08:002009-03-17T07:56:00.000+08:00that look like my third grade essay.that look like my third grade essay.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-11563182407648663442009-03-17T04:07:00.000+08:002009-03-17T04:07:00.000+08:00Wow! Your Chinese is great J! Your friend is soooo...Wow! Your Chinese is great J! <BR/><BR/>Your friend is soooo lucky! I totally consider that a super power, eating whatever you want and not gain weight!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-56303171782726746822009-03-16T22:03:00.000+08:002009-03-16T22:03:00.000+08:00你的中文写的真的很棒。表达的很完整,也很幽默,富有情趣。有些小问题,比如第一段“一直很饿的人没有怎么...你的中文写的真的很棒。表达的很完整,也很幽默,富有情趣。有些小问题,比如第一段“一直很饿的人没有怎么特别”中的“怎么”,我觉得用“什么”更加好一些。不过这些都不会影响,相信当你在中国生活的时间越来越久后自然就解决了。<BR/>瑞典语,嗯,有时间会去尝试。。。Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-87821494858697975652009-03-16T20:20:00.000+08:002009-03-16T20:20:00.000+08:00加油!Great little essay, I enjoyed it.I would like t...加油!<BR/><BR/>Great little essay, I enjoyed it.<BR/><BR/>I would like to second the support of starting a Chinese blog, I would def follow that.The Taipanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04520767562754428163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-75202633661462583302009-03-16T13:43:00.000+08:002009-03-16T13:43:00.000+08:00Your essay is really quiet good for only studying ...Your essay is really quiet good for only studying for such a short time! <BR/>I am self studying Japanese right now, I only wish I can get to that point in a few years. You give me the inspiration to study harder! Thanks!<BR/><BR/>Keep up the good work!<BR/>mochimochihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07996760354924617996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-61073597747194441322009-03-16T13:02:00.000+08:002009-03-16T13:02:00.000+08:00很棒的文章,而且富有情趣!:DVery good job, with lots of fun~! :...很棒的文章,而且富有情趣!:D<BR/>Very good job, with lots of fun~! :DWagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12666063332933534131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-89015649226041796062009-03-16T11:54:00.000+08:002009-03-16T11:54:00.000+08:00I bow to you, Tess!I bow to you, Tess!Nancyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13178290697351352495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-40589401709235792532009-03-16T10:42:00.000+08:002009-03-16T10:42:00.000+08:00Great job! I reckon to speak for most of your mer...Great job! I reckon to speak for most of your merry band of followers when I say that I am SO pleased that you have started listening to our collective advice and begun blogging in Chinese! Well done!<BR/><BR/>It was very clever of you to post a homework essay. I think you should do that any time in the future when you don't have time to write a new post but want to update your blog. That way you'll have the benefit of extra feedback, even when you aren't able to benefit from extra writing practice.<BR/><BR/>And, on the subject of feedback, here's mine. I echo the other commentators in my principal impression, which is that your meaning is extremely clear. (Surely the most important point!)It seems to me that perhaps the best next step you can take, aside from the suggestions the other commentators have made, is to interlard your mainly straightforward, declarative sentences with a certain degree of modal inflection. This will not only add zest to an already engaging, personable style, but will also actually enhance the clarity of your communication by emphasizing the nuances in the relationships between your ideas. <BR/><BR/>Also, IF you have time to rewrite your pieces, I'd suggest asking yourself this question: When I wrote this sentence, was I thinking in Chinese or was I translating? I've known this to be helpful for some people.<BR/><BR/>Lastly, while I agree with the other commentators who have suggested reading for style (I mean, of course they are right, that's how we learn to write well in any language, isn't it?), I also take your point when you say you don't have time to read Chinese novels right now. May I suggest you consider getting Feng Shengli's 冯胜利 book “汉语书面语初编: Expressions of Written Chinese?” The opening sections might be more trouble than they're worth for your purposes at the moment (I wouldn't know about that, I just have the impression that you're already pretty busy), but there are some handy usage guides at the back that might interest you.<BR/><BR/>Oh, one more thing: have you thought about picking out one or two 成语 and writing a post around those? I bet it would really make those stick in your mind!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-78754865006612788202009-03-16T09:52:00.000+08:002009-03-16T09:52:00.000+08:00a very nice starting point here~~ congraulations!!...a very nice starting point here~~ congraulations!!! <BR/><BR/>this is very funny and i think even better than my English which i have learnt over 10 years... <BR/><BR/>Many of comments say something on this alrerady as i only can add one or two. Hope you not mind.<BR/><BR/>the title<BR/>我的很特别的朋友 is too complicated. used 我很特別的朋友 or even 很特別的朋友 is enough. <BR/><BR/>Enjoy learning Chinese, and you may be another Prof. Malmqvist.mantsehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14466019253420608548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-60252992663050999922009-03-16T07:31:00.000+08:002009-03-16T07:31:00.000+08:00shopgirl -nääääääää det e den ju inte... du e ju n...shopgirl -nääääääää det e den ju inte... du e ju native :)Jonna Wibeliushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08954672453008704738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-85049413383276940782009-03-16T07:16:00.000+08:002009-03-16T07:16:00.000+08:00shit jonna. din kinesiska är bättre än min!!!!!!!!...shit jonna. din kinesiska är bättre än min!!!!!!!!!!!!<BR/><BR/>you go girlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8491088023973371313.post-32078883215052985662009-03-16T06:53:00.000+08:002009-03-16T06:53:00.000+08:00Thank you all guys for your wonderful comments! I ...Thank you all guys for your wonderful comments! I never expected such a response to this post -wonderful! <BR/><BR/> afritzse -yeah I should practice more with flash cards... <BR/><BR/>Anonymous -Sweden what? I am not following??Jonna Wibeliushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08954672453008704738noreply@blogger.com